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Comment by clarmore:
This is my second go-around =) - I really like your take on the challenge. I just wish there was a little more contrast... you need some dark blacks and white whites. I would also like to see the girl a little more in focus. However, overall I think you did a good job =)

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Comment by magicshutter:
I really thought I'd see more of this type of thing during this challenge, but since I havn't props to you! Great glow on the grass, like the soft nature of the entire shot. It looks as though you've masked her out of this layer. I like it

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Comment by rex:
I am making two passes on this Challenge. I will vote on your photo then return later(before voting is over) to comment on what I like and dislike about your shot. You can take the comments however you wish and I will try not to be mean. Just don't take it the wrong way.
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Looks smoky. Not very clear. Good composition though.

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Comment by sbeaumont:
nice capture but would have liked the woman to be a bit sharper focus

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Comment by nevillec:
Brilliant - this could be the still from a movie - in any case done with a lot of empathy and an "eye for the moment". Would have desaturated everything except the figure - the brownish leaves on the ground distracts a bit from the overall effect. Lighting is excellent.

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Comment by datcat:
Excellent use of colour. Near the girl's foot there is a blown out patch? Can't see what it is, but if you have PS it should have been cloned out.

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Comment by alanfreed:
Um, doesn't look "forgotten" if someone is there visiting them... :)

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Comment by timmotyka:
I dont know how I feel about this. The composition is great woman great just wish that blur was not used 6

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Comment by srbrubaker:
Title is a bit ironic given the person standing & remembering. Lack of contrast hurts this photo. So does the fact that nothing seems to be in focus.

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Comment by love:
I love this! Color and comp just perfect - something weird with her feet though and that white thing next to it 8