Odd Ballby
hollisterGqComment by KiwiShotz: ::: Critique Club :::
I am in New Zealand so please excuse if I get this wrong, I wouldn't want to do you an injustice.
First Impression - the most important one:
Puzzled. I didn't quite know what to make of this initially as through ignorance I didn't know if there's a subtlety here that I didn't get.
Composition:
Composition is all about assembling the elements in a way that leads the viewer into your image where they will find the focus of the tale you're telling with it. Given my down-under ignorance, I was looking for some help from the image in interpretting it. When voting and in review, I'm still a little unsure of what the odd man out is.
Subject:
There's five elements here and in some ways they conflict with each other for attention. You've met the challenge and the idea is a very clever one.
Technical (Colour and light):
Your sinlge light source gives the image some of it's drama and images need drama. It has also thrown some meddlesome shadows like the one of the glove name. Sometimes you can defend that by holding a iece of white paper as a reflector. The light from it is diffused and quite subtle, in fact doesn't look like a light source at all.
The colour is almost a desaturation down to cream and brown which I rather like. It gives it an almost aged look, makes everything looks like it's from the museum. A mysterious haunting look like that is really quite cool.
To get a Ribbon?:
Ribboned images usually have a wow factor. In this case, there are som opportunities for that. As one of the commenters mentioned, it's flattish lighting could be enhanced by increased contrast. Maybe a re-composition would highlight the message a little more. I have a feeling that the basketball could do with a highlight. You can do that with something like a torch.
Summary:
This is an interesting image. It has a lot of mystery and aging in it. I would love to see it sting the voters into action. Have a play with some of the options and suggestions and see what lessons can be learned
Brett