Effort
by seussie

Comment by DaMoNarch:
Great expression on his face.

Effort
by seussie

Comment by Robby:
Great timing. The background is distracting - need lower DOF.

Effort
by seussie

Comment by gprinsloo:
Nice action, dof, color, lighting and comp.

Leaving California
by seussie

Comment by stephan:
Hello Susie! Your photo was assigned to me in context of the Critique Club. So here it goes:

Composition: Very good. I like the palm tree on the left and also the open space to the right, where the plane flies to. It really shows "Leaving California". I think it would look even better when the plane would be a little lower below the tree, but that's only a minor issue. I guess it was hard enough to capture the plane like that.

Lighting: A nice sunset. It gives a good lighting and makes your subjects just silhouettes. I like it.

Focus: As GeneralE said: Very good focus on the plane. It almost seems to be better focussed than the palm tree. Well done.

Art: You met the challenge very well. As said above your photo really shows what the title says. So overall my "critique" is a bit short because I really can't see anything wrong. Neither technically nor artistically.

Keep shooting,
Stephan

Leaving California
by seussie

Comment by windyacres52:
Very good picture, really clear, I like the color

Leaving California
by seussie

Comment by GeneralE:
Surprisingly good detail on the plane considering how long a shot this is -- well-done!

Leaving California
by seussie

Comment by Jacko:
Great shot. I like how you incorporated that tree on the left ... it helps to give it a locatoin; You don't those in Canada. Good luck. Love the orange colour. 9

Leaving California
by seussie

Comment by nathaliedoo:
Just like a postcard!!!

Leaving California
by seussie

Comment by Malokata:
Seems weird to have something ononly one side of the picture, would've liked to have either less of that or something else on the right. Still, good picture.

Leaving California
by seussie

Comment by carsten:
Good composition. Well done. High score from me.