Raquel and I had one too many :)
by zadore

Comment by joanns:
You're terrible parent! This is funny, actually. Your child is going to love this when he/she gets older. But, it is really blurry. I think you had a camer shake problem.

Another Brick in the Wall
by zadore

Comment by alienate:
would have been nice if he wasn't against a brick wall.

Another Brick in the Wall
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Comment by austinscott:
WOULD HAVE BEEN BETTER WITHOUT THE MODEL

Another Brick in the Wall
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Comment by kate12303:
It looks too posed, but I think I get what you were trying to do. Not bad.

Raquel and I had one too many :)
by zadore

Comment by SharQ:
funny, but very, very motion blurred, unfortunately. Some more sharpness would probably make this image significantly higher rated.

It's a bird...it's a plane...
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Comment by jmsetzler:
Greetings from the Critique Club :)

Hi Zadore...

I'm at a bit of a loss on how to really critique this photo. There is nothing wrong with the image, but there is not a single particularly inspiring element of the photo other than the clouds. The clouds do look nice, but they aren't the focus of the challenge unfortunately. I can't really see a way to improve this particular image.

This photo placed mid pack in the challenge, which tells me that the overall voter thought it was just an average photo. Maybe some stronger 'punch line' would have improved the performance here on a larger scale. I think PTLParsons' comment sums it up best.

Keep up the good work :)

John Setzler

Another Brick in the Wall
by zadore

Comment by Enzo:
Evocative, good depressing colour but the hint of a smile on the model's lips.

It's a bird...it's a plane...
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Comment by windyacres52:
it's both....very pretty

It's a bird...it's a plane...
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Comment by mcrael:
Too bad you couldn't get the bird in a little closer. He gets lost among the clouds. Makes a nice abstract photo.

It's a bird...it's a plane...
by zadore

Comment by nathaliedoo:
Too bad there is that line under the bird.... nice though