Grandpa Traveling No Where --(Fast!!!!!)
by Diana

Comment by zadore:
...from Critique Club...

Hi Diana

FIRST IMPRESSION:
Just a snapshot :(

COMPOSITION:
I think a wider crop would have worked better, to get more of the landscape. The subject is too centered. :(

TECHNICAL:
Nice focus. Seems a bit dark, though...increasing the exposure a bit would have helped. :|

ARTISTIC:
It's a cute photo, but not very interesting to look at...sorry :(

OVERALL:
I think there is potential, but it would need improvement in the technical dept. :(

Cheers and good luck in the future challenges.

Suspicious Mind by Elvis Presley
by Diana

Comment by austinscott:
COULDN'T LIVE WITHOUT PLAYING WITH YOUR BARBIE DOLLS?

Suspicious Mind by Elvis Presley
by Diana

Comment by PTLParsons:
You get a 10 for creativity and composition, very unique and well thought out. I like how Jackie is right against his shoulder and Marilyn is down and a few steps behind Jackie. Speaks tons. Very good composition with nice execution. Good croping and focus. Nice job. Not "exciting" but really good shot. 7 PTL

Suspicious Mind by Elvis Presley
by Diana

Comment by alienate:
hah. nice.

Suspicious Mind by Elvis Presley
by Diana

Comment by cykhansen:
Conveys the lyrics of the song well.

Suspicious Mind by Elvis Presley
by Diana

Comment by daxo:
nice.

Suspicious Mind by Elvis Presley
by Diana

Comment by teachme53:
sorry not my cup of tea

Suspicious Mind by Elvis Presley
by Diana

Comment by Enzo:
Very clever play on the Title. Image arrangement is clever as well.

Suspicious Mind by Elvis Presley
by Diana

Comment by andlb:
Beautiful picture!! :) pure 10

Grandpa Traveling No Where --(Fast!!!!!)
by Diana

Comment by windyacres52:
Lot's of rocks....ouch!