Light Slips Through Holes
by right_field

Comment by Nuzzer:
The reflection at the top is offputting and with two hole reflections you should show both holes in the paper

Light Slips Through Holes
by right_field

Comment by lauralink:
Woooo! This makes me kinda dizzy, but at least it is clearly a piece of paper to write upn; the interplay of light and shadow, substance and absence are a bonus for the viewer.

Light Slips Through Holes
by right_field

Comment by Vapor63:
Oof, the light/reflection really bothers me here, sorry.

B&W/more contrast with some rotation could have made this easier to look at; cool idea.

Light Slips Through Holes
by right_field

Comment by Matt414ce:
What I like: the horizontal and vertical lines are nice.

What might improve it: The glare needs to go! Also, it seems like you may have compressed the image too much.

Light Slips Through Holes
by right_field

Comment by srbrubaker:
I like the idea. I find the glare on the wall rather distracting. And I wish the paper had no lines and showed more texture. Knowing I usually crop too tightly, I think the photo would be a bit better with some cropped from the bottom. Finally, I might have played with hue and saturation a bit. This photo might be better as a sepia or b&w to emphasize the form rather than the color - which is not that interesting.

Light Slips Through Holes
by right_field

Comment by atupdate:
Pretty effective at what you were trying to accomplish; however, the glare from the light source takes away from the main topic of this entry.

Light Slips Through Holes
by right_field

Comment by Nobody:
Simple, but it works.

Light Slips Through Holes
by right_field

Comment by Judi:
Very simple idea.

Light Slips Through Holes
by right_field

Comment by talmy:
You could have lighted this better -- annoying glare at top and paper looks dull and dirty.

Light Slips Through Holes
by right_field

Comment by Elaine:
This shot does not hold my interest.