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| 09/28/2005 12:37:54 PM |
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| 09/28/2005 02:07:48 AM |
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| 09/13/2005 09:10:54 PM |
Red Bootby painthorseComment by sfalice: Greetings from the Critique Club:
Congratulations on getting through your first Challenge.
Composition: Your subject is the red boot(s). I think while you tried to set a scene that would include the boots, your scene isso full of other items it makes it difficult to find that main focal point. Even though each of the items is interesting in its own way, (or perhaps because they are each interesting) the boots get lost and the viewer loses interest. As an experiment, you might remove one or two items at a time, photograph the result, until you find a pleasing composition that sends your eye straight to the red boots. You might also consider a black backdrop to isolate the boots or your new more spare composition. I say all this because you have an interesting idea here and it's well worth pursuing.
Then, ISO 400 is a very fast number to use in bright daylight. The image is a bit 'hot'. Try 100 (if your camera will take it) and work up. And try f5.6 or 6.3 along with the 100 or 200ISO. Finally, you might try bracketing your images and note the results.
It's good to see you experiment with a themed set-up, Looks as if you're going to have fun at this game. Welcome aboard. |
| 09/06/2005 08:07:59 PM |
Red Bootby painthorseComment by pixieland: Scene is rather cluttered. Need to draw more attention to your subject, maybe move in close and remove a few unnessary items. |
| 09/05/2005 07:46:56 PM |
Red Bootby painthorseComment by attache: A littletoo much background on this picture dor me. I would have lijked the photo cropped a bit more |
| 09/04/2005 03:48:06 PM |
Red Bootby painthorseComment by digitalknight: lots of visual noise here - the background being in focus takes attention away from the subject, and the weeds/hay the boots are resting on gives my eye all kinds of lines to explore taking my eye away from your subject. I would recommend cropping right down to the boots, and holding a sheet in front of the sun to soften the light and shadows. Hope that helps. 3 |
| 09/04/2005 03:30:42 PM |
Red Bootby painthorseComment by mesmeraj: Very cluttered and no real focus point. I really have to concerntrae to see the 2 boots. What is that distracting white thing down the middle? |
| 09/04/2005 02:40:35 AM |
Red Bootby painthorseComment by johansec: Its almost impossible to get a good photo in bright direct sunlight. A little bit more subdued lighting, a perspective other than head on and some depth of field all could have helped the cool elements you have assembled here to be a more high scoring and intertesting photo. |
| 09/03/2005 09:04:57 PM |
Red Bootby painthorseComment by Elaine: I would like this beter without the rope going through the boot, and if I couldn't see the plants through the fence. |
| 09/03/2005 05:56:48 AM |
Red Bootby painthorseComment by pacpinto: Too much clutter in this one.If it were only the boots in the woodbench, I think it would have worked better. |
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