Golden Fisherman
by jellyoooo

Comment by sfalice:
Greetings from the Critique Club

Very nice monochromatic image. Perhaps a bit soft, but still that could show the mood you are trying to project. I like the contrast of lights and darks, although the lights may be just a touch too bright. And also technically, I'd like to see you dodge that bit of dark right next to the man's nose. A bit of contrast there would be helpful to separate the face from the water.

The composition is quite nice. I would like to see the entire fishing rigg here, but that too is a judgement call.

I suppose your relatively average score might be because there is not too much "wow" factor in this pleasant image. Hard to tell.

Good luck in future challenges!

Golden Fisherman
by jellyoooo

Comment by LeeD:
Great potential. Focus seems a touch soft.

Heaven's Flowers...
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Comment by pasaro:
Very good definition and composition. Specially the flower on the left; I think it does fit in the the challenge. One of my top five!

Heaven's Flowers...
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Comment by Balko:
love the "leading lines" :)

Heaven's Flowers...
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Comment by liquid shadow:
Nicely done! Love the curve..

Golden Fisherman
by jellyoooo

Comment by Elaine:
There is too much glare on the water for me.

deep-blue-bw-dp.jpg
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Comment by mandyturner:
very cool

Heaven's Flowers...
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Comment by CalliopeKel:
Really pretty & Interesting.

Heaven's Flowers...
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Comment by KarenNfld:
Nice!

Heaven's Flowers...
by jellyoooo

Comment by KarisMo:
a little too blown