Yellow Attack!
by Penny Lane

Comment by ralph:
bit soft
lack of context(camera tilt /person falling backwards ?)

and (IMO) what really hurts it is the closed eyes ...

Yellow Attack!
by Penny Lane

Comment by LalliSig:
For starters, it would have scored much better if it were in focus, I can´t imagine there being motion blur since it´s at 1/800 of a second. Also the shot doesn´t connect with me, I don´t get what is going on, needs a backround or something to show the environment. What I mean is, is she slipping, is she jumping up in the air, is someone throwing the flowers at her, you can´t really make any of that out from viewing the shot. I know that comes from the title but it shouldn´t have to, the shot should tell the whole story.

Hope this helps :)

Yellow Attack!
by Penny Lane

Comment by bseifipour:
I enjoy this one, and think it should have done better!

You say"jump", I say," how high?"
by Penny Lane

Comment by hotpasta:
wow...great expression

Yellow Attack!
by Penny Lane

Comment by Maverick:
Hmm... The motion blur or focus softness here detracts from the image imho. The overall pose looks very forced and unnatural to me (she may not be a great actress = ). The colors and exposure are nice though.

Yellow Attack!
by Penny Lane

Comment by Melethia:
Cute!

Cartwheeling Round The Lake
by Penny Lane

Comment by LoudDog:
Great timing, good catch!

Cartwheeling Round The Lake
by Penny Lane

Comment by docvorhies:
Beautiful shot. The color contrast between the shirt and the backround is great.

Yellow Attack!
by Penny Lane

Comment by lauraodom:
Nice action shot.

Cartwheeling Round The Lake
by Penny Lane

Comment by GrayGhost:
Nice idea, composition, colors. Faster shutter speed for less motion blur and more sharpness on subject would be better.