Window Boxby
tembaComment by sarampo: Hi Jane, greetings from the Critique Club!
I must say that this photo is original like I haven't seen in a while now.
You demonstrate great photographic eye, and a terrific sense of composition.
Lighting
Even throughout the whole picture, a little darker at the bottom, but nothing considerably.
Tones
The yellow just shouts at you: "I'm here!", it is greatly balanced with the wall and the flowers.
Saturated just enough.
Composition
What is there to be said? Perfect framing, the slope on the windowsill makes the viewer come back again and again to the spot.
Great balance between the low green's and the negative space on the top.
Processing
Great texture on the wall, I would have brightened a bit more the lower are. so that people can also divert their attention to that spot.
Overall, it's a great photo, that scored almost a 6.
Probably people where more into bolder shots, landscapes, etc, and the simpler yet effective look of this photo didn't appeal much.
You did a good job, and this one's a keeper.
If you have any questions feel free to
contact me.
Regards,
Joao
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