Across the Bay
by talmy

Comment by jmlelii:
This is a fantastic bridge photograph. If the bridge is the leading line, what is it leading me to? There is no real defined subject here, so I can only give this a 5. Great shot though.

Across the Bay
by talmy

Comment by rr_meyer:
looks like a nice day out. nice job

Across the Bay
by talmy

Comment by chele:
very nice!!

Across the Bay
by talmy

Comment by bobgaither:
Maybe the right two thirds of a crop would have been better. I know shooting towards the sun on the left. Correct it with PS. Golden Gate and Bay Area are the same problem with me sun and humidity.

2006-08-25
by talmy

Comment by yanko:
Greetings from the Critique Club!

First impression is this meets the challenge but little else. It's a nice scene in general but I feel too much care was made into trying to meet the challenge vs making a more appealing photo.

I like the composition especially how the hills create a leading line along with the fence. The fence post however, I don't particular care for.

As for improvements I would do something about that sky for starters. I assume there isn't anything you can do in photoshop but if there is some detail there I would try pulling out whatever is there. If not just be more aware of your skies before heading out for a shoot. Also, I'd try and avoid including fence posts. If it wasn't there and you had better sky and some more post processing this would have scored much higher, IMO.

Entering the Tunnel
by talmy

Comment by hokie:
4

Entering the Tunnel
by talmy

Comment by xXxscarletxXx:
Would be nicer if it wasnt sooo dark

2006-08-25
by talmy

Comment by jimness:
The barbed wire looks like it's chopping the poor moos' legs off...

2006-08-25
by talmy

Comment by KarenNfld:
Lovely scene, I get the feeling that the mountains and cows are the subjects though.

2006-08-25
by talmy

Comment by xXxscarletxXx:
The post in the foreground is distracting otherwise a nice image