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The Pyramid Of Learning
11/25/2005 05:48:14 PM
The Pyramid Of Learning
by aledfc

Comment by olddj:
if you had left the pyramid at 1 through 4, instead of 5, would have had an even number of books
The Pyramid Of Learning
11/24/2005 09:13:59 PM
The Pyramid Of Learning
by aledfc

Comment by rick13601:
I would have used this picture for a challenge with a pyramid theme. Otherwise, its simply a pic of a pile of dictionaries. Try using black and white with a different angle.
The Pyramid Of Learning
11/23/2005 10:56:58 AM
The Pyramid Of Learning
by aledfc

Comment by GrayGhost:
Nice and sharp, but could use something more, more angle, a kid leaning on the pyramid, a pad of paper with writing, etc.
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The Pyramid Of Learning
11/23/2005 05:40:51 AM
The Pyramid Of Learning
by aledfc

Comment by Structor:
this picture should be in Odd challenge, - 15 books
The Pyramid Of Learning
11/23/2005 05:16:14 AM
The Pyramid Of Learning
by aledfc

Comment by Kemptonreporter:
So.
What we have here is a pile of books on a carpet.
15 books.
On 1 carpet.
And nothing which looks even either. (The pile is off-centre, and skew.)
I think you'd have done better by taking more time in deciding on your angles, and on using lighting to add character, and isolating the books from their background, might also have helped.
Don't give up trying.
And remember this motto:
"Is this pizzazz?
Or is this pedestrian?"
It's what helps me decide on what gets deleted and what stays.
Good luck for future entries!
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The Pyramid Of Learning
11/23/2005 01:51:51 AM
The Pyramid Of Learning
by aledfc

Comment by Tommy 2 Tone:
The texture on the ground is very distracting
An Army Man At Work
11/22/2005 09:11:16 PM
An Army Man At Work
by aledfc

Comment by graphicfunk:
A very nice entry. Bumping up.
An Army Man At Work
11/22/2005 07:59:38 AM
An Army Man At Work
by aledfc

Comment by scrum8:
I might have cropped further left to get rid of the white pipe on the right side.
An Army Man At Work
11/22/2005 05:22:27 AM
An Army Man At Work
by aledfc

Comment by balancedfox:
The colours seem quite washed out - more contrast. The white thing (pipe?) on the right distracts me also.
An Army Man At Work
11/21/2005 05:53:28 PM
An Army Man At Work
by aledfc

Comment by tannah:
He is camouflaged alright... but the photo is too blurry, and messy..
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