Take a Seat
by 777STAN

Comment by love:
I don't care for the crop. 5

Take a Seat
by 777STAN

Comment by Luci11e:
YES! I like it!

Take a Seat
by 777STAN

Comment by Art Roflmao:
They just don't make chairs like that anymore.

"Feels Just Like a Thought!"
by 777STAN

Comment by Ja-9:
funny shot...seems to be hazy to me...but I'm not sure what you do to fix that...more contrast???

"Feels Just Like a Thought!"
by 777STAN

Comment by hotpasta:
good for the family album

Willing Payment
by 777STAN

Comment by hotpasta:
might have been stronger as a black and white, but well done anyway 7

Six Years Together, Over 100 Years Cumulative With First Spouses!
by 777STAN

Comment by JacksonGariety:
Touching, not much for a photo though...

Message edited by author 2010-01-04 01:23:20.

Duotone Macro
by 777STAN

Comment by JacksonGariety:
Here's Your Critique and Feedback as requested! :D

The goal of the Puzzle Macro Challenge was to create an interesting, detailed, piece of photographic art without presenting exactly what the viewer was looking at. You did a very good job of hiding your subject in the photo, but overall the isn't very eye-grabbing. You made up for your relatively simple subject with color, Depth of Field, lighting and luminosity. The colors are outstanding, probably the best part of the photo. Next to that is the luminosity of the tarp and the brown stripe, almost giving it a glow-effect.The depth of field is fantastic and make the difference between a 4.4 and a 5.4! A combination of those three factors really makes the photo pop, come off as a painting, it's very, pretty. There is one major factor that kept me from voting this a 6. This would be the fold in the tarp in the upper-left. For me, had that continued onward, you wouldn't have that diagonal drop-off of the tarp taking the focus away from the luminous brown-stripe. Your score would've been higher had the tarp been in a slightly different position when you took the photo. In colclusion, there's only so much you can do with a tarp in photography, and you did just about as much as could be done with this subject. Hope that was helpful to you!

- ColemanGariety
The DPChallenge Critique Club

Six Years Together, Over 100 Years Cumulative With First Spouses!
by 777STAN

Comment by David Ey:
Nice story. The 1 was from me, not so much for the photo, the background sucks, but for what I could see in their faces.

Duotone Macro
by 777STAN

Comment by colorcarnival:
It looks like canvas. Love how the brown strip is glowing.