Turn up the radio!by
eliniasComment by BMacD: Hi! Here̢۪s a comment from the Critique Club.
First Impression:
Nice shot. Drawn to the eyes, smile, speaker and then down the yellow tie.
Composition:
Good choice of colours. Very vibrant. May have over done the red balance.
Framing worked, helps with the expression.
Subject:
I agree with the comments, met the challenge well.
Technical:
Find the off colour shadow to the right distracting. A second light, or post processing may have helped. Moving subject away from the back drop would have reduced the harshness of the shadow behind the hand holding the radio. Focus is a little soft.
Summary:
Nice shot! His expression and your colour choices worked really well.
p.s. Welcome to the site. Based on your first four entries, you are off to a good start!
Photographer found comment helpful.