My sand castle
by dube140463

Comment by hotpasta:
I jst wished she was looking up so we could see that pretty face...like this it's uninteresting and has no real point of interest

Luminescent - Sidelight
by dube140463

Comment by marble:
Almost sacrosanct.

Luminescent - Sidelight
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Comment by pcody:
I don't think the darkness enhanced this picture. The light overwhelms the rest of the picture.

Luminescent - Sidelight
by dube140463

Comment by LN13:
That light is really harsh on the eyes.

Luminescent - Sidelight
by dube140463

Comment by puma:
You lost too much of the subject from an underexposed photo.

Can you see me scream?
by dube140463

Comment by kari1:
::: Critique Club :::

Hi, my name is Kari and from the critique club.

What a pleasure to review and critique your image ... Third challenge and top 20 already.

First Impression - the most important one:
This is so cool .. I loved it when I voted on it and looking at it closer .. yup still like this one.

Composition:

I like the way that this is framed ... For my tastes it is a little working on the centred .. but this may not be able to be helped.

Subject:
It definately meets the challenge ... I think it is acutally quite a clever find something like this in nature.

Technical (Colour and light):

I might have worked the contrast a little more to see what else could be brought out. I like the natural light of course ... but taking the shot at different times may also give different perspectives.

To grow its vote?:
You did so well .. congrats .. I am not sure about how to grow this one .. but continue playing and learning.

Summary:
Fantastic find and great shot!

If you've got any questions about this critique, please feel free to contact me via the PM system.

Cheers

Kari

A picture is worth a thousand words! at 9 nine months old ;0)
by dube140463

Comment by bseifipour:
Nice use of selective color. Education starts early! The shadows in the bottom right take away from the picture though. -6

A picture is worth a thousand words! at 9 nine months old ;0)
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Comment by m_martinhere:
Nice concept, but the lighting seems not quite right. Maybe a second light? Lighter clothes for more contrast? Just suggestions.

A picture is worth a thousand words! at 9 nine months old ;0)
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Comment by megano:
I really like it

Can you see me scream?
by dube140463

Comment by graphicfunk:
A lovely find. Congratulations on your top 20 finish.