Big Leaf
by admajic

Comment by TheHummer:
I think those are legs at the bottom of the leaf, needed to eiter not be there or more of a focal point. Also too much depth of field, giving too much detail around the edges.

Hard habit to break
by admajic

Comment by kari1:

::: Critique Club :::

Hi, my name is Kari and from the critique club.

First Impression - the most important one:
Its a pity I am an ex-smoker .. I can still smell the stuff.

Composition:
Works for this picture.

Subject:
meets the challenge well and truly.

Technical (Colour and light):
Great colour and good use of DOF ... I like that the fags in the background are out of focus as this gives a great impression of trying to quit and failing.

To grow its vote?:
hard to say .. this type of shot works for some and not others ...

Summary:
I think this is a great second entry .. you have a good eye .. keep using it.

If you've got any questions about this critique, please feel free to contact me via
the PM system.

Cheers

Kari

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by admajic

Comment by LalliSig:
Nice choice of DOF, works well here in isolating the subject from an appropriate backround.

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Comment by zomgwtf:
Try out a b&w version too.
Nice DoF brings out the subject from the backgroung.
I would have left more place on the left and not put the cigarette in the middle, I think it would be more comfortable for the eye.

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by admajic

Comment by MTPixels:
My choice for a definite top 10 finish. Composition, lighting, color and DOF are all right on the money. Well done!

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Comment by YourBuddyFlo:
great detail on such a small subject but the background somehow takes away form the image

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Comment by ericwoo:
Great composition and nice lighting. I also like the depth of field use, but I'd really like to see the back of the ash tray focused and the cig pack left out of focus. I know...too picky. Nice capture and great concept.

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Comment by Lilhoop:
nice composition and angle

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Comment by BrianR:
Wheres the failure without the title....7

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Comment by Fibre Optix:
AMEN Brother.