Roof Wave
by jent

Comment by MrXpress:
The rhythm part is fairly good, but the image itself is devoid of any pop and lacks sharpness

Roof Wave
by jent

Comment by gdanie11:
The lighting is very soft and even which tends to make this shot a little flat....more shadows might help emphasis the canopy.

Trees of Knowlage
by jent

Comment by climbin2thetop:
the title makes the shot.

Trees of Knowlage
by jent

Comment by moniepenny:
Seems a little crooked to me, and you spelled knowledge wrong, which kind of takes away from the presentation to me.

Roof Wave
by jent

Comment by hopnjohn:
Yes, you have rhythm going on. The focus is a little soft and the columns are distracting with all those posters on them. I wonder if a lower angle, facing upward and most of the columns cropped out would have been better.

Trees of Knowlage
by jent

Comment by olbol:
Them trees are good :) Keep your horizontals straight

Trees of Knowlage
by jent

Comment by JunieMoon:
Need better focus. There is also something wrong on the walkway. It seems to be very unevenly exposed and color seems to not match the scene all that well. Anyway, the topic needs work as well. Maybe zooming in on the columns with steps leading to them would make a better image. Trees did not add to the overall theme of the image.

Trees of Knowlage
by jent

Comment by GuGi:
Photograph seems to be tilting a little to the right and I wish there was better focus on the building as it is the center of this shot

Trees of Knowlage
by jent

Comment by Mambe:
You maybe should have rotate it a bit to straighten the photo.
If your intention was to center the attention upon the trees , a vertical(portrait) shot could have been more stunning or maybe just if you'd have took this one showing more the branches of the trees.
What I don't like in this photo is the white/greyish square , it seems like you "paint" it , all the path look unreal.

Roof Wave
by jent

Comment by DefyTime:
College campus?