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| 01/25/2010 10:31:57 AM |
Christineby albc28Comment by Alicia: The model's pose appears forced and very uncomfortable. The colors are super flat and I feel there is too much grass - tighter crop would have been good. |
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| 01/25/2010 09:33:55 AM |
Christineby albc28Comment by Cory: Neat shot, excellent concept. Would have scored higher from me if you had a shallower DOF and had post processed to do something about the similarity of color between the dress and the grass (of course that might have been exactly what you were going for....). Overall, not bad, just too much distraction from all those sticks. |
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| 01/25/2010 08:50:17 AM |
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| 01/24/2010 07:40:45 PM |
Christineby albc28Comment by Ja-9: I can't find any fault in this from the photography point of view...but her body position just doesn't hold my interest |
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| 01/23/2010 11:49:10 PM |
A Sexy Angelby albc28Comment by MattO: Greetings from the CC. I have read the thread you started on this post, and have looked at it several times before finally writing this critique in hopes that I could help you understand what might improve this image.
I am not fond of the pose, it doesn't flatter your pretty model. Her butt is flat from the pose, and the angle she is looking back just isn't appealing to me. The lighting is especially harsh on her, forget the shadows for a minute, the specular highlights on her nose and forehead are pretty harsh as well as her near shoulder. The shadow isn't near as soft as I'd light it to be and the angle the strobe is at led itself to that, get it up higher and fill with a reflector or another strobe at lower strength, not sure what you are using for modifier, but the light appears small, if it is, get it closer to the subject to give it a larger appearance. You have the model to work with, work on the smaller things and this is a much better photo. |
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| 01/23/2010 03:10:55 PM |
Christineby albc28Comment by RianBotes: Nice setting in the grasslands blending/going well with the dress. Bit unnatural pose. |
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| 01/23/2010 02:59:11 PM |
Christineby albc28Comment by KarenNfld: I like the tones and colours. I might have cropped a bit off the left so it wasn't so centered. But overall very well done. |
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| 01/23/2010 02:18:23 AM |
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| 01/22/2010 10:25:18 PM |
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| 01/22/2010 09:22:13 PM |
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