-e> n square;
by kiwiness

Comment by kellie:
very nice use of the word square

-e> n square;
by kiwiness

Comment by moodville:
I would probably have cropped the top more and not been as tight on the bottom of the second square. I like how the texture of the paper shows vibrant, and the concept is interesting.

-e> n square;
by kiwiness

Comment by tiff:
your image is very interesting and i like the way you used the dictionary to show "square"

-e> n square;
by kiwiness

Comment by irae:
Don't care for the composition, but maybe I just don't get it. Why cram everything into the LLHC like that? Actually, not wild about the squares there, either. Still, something appealing here. Nice work?

-e> n square;
by kiwiness

Comment by Cub:
Great idea and good capture! Cub

Private road only.....
by kiwiness

Comment by GolferDDS:
can't read it but I like it.

Private road only.....
by kiwiness

Comment by PTLParsons:
Nice sepia and dof. Why's the sign so beaten up? Good composition and execution. Worth a 6

Private road only.....
by kiwiness

Comment by nds:
Verbieten verboten ;-) - prohibitions prohibited

Private road only.....
by kiwiness

Comment by BadPigg:
This is the type of shot I was hoping to get, couldnt quite get it though and gave up. great job.

Road to Fogginess
by kiwiness

Comment by crabappl3:
Critique Club Comment:

For your first entry, you have chosen a very nice shot! This is a great find, and I glad you happened upon it so you could share it with us.

I like the balance of the shot. From the tree on the left that brings me into the frame, from the road with it's great texture that takes my eyes back to the top to the little tree on the right, and then back out of the frame. You might have tried moving the entry of the road to the lower left leading to the middle of the frame, but that's a personal choice.

The fog rolling across the road had a very calm feel to it. It makes me wonder what is on the other side? Make me feel curious, not anxious. Very nice. The amount of the white at the top is not over powering, as it has a softness to it.

Your conversion to black and white is well done. You have great detail in the branches and the pebbles in the road.

I like this shot, glad you shared it with us, I hope to see more of your work.

-danny