swang
by chriskory

Comment by posthumous:
You were robbed. I guess the DPCers just ain't got that swing. They want the rhythm of a drum machine.

swang
by chriskory

Comment by GuGi:
Good one. I have tried that several times, never catch a good focus on any of them, now I have to try again.
Excellent background there, fits really nicely.

aibrubus
by chriskory

Comment by marcellieb:
This is a comment from the Critique Club;

I liked this image in the challenge. It is simple yet very effective. Like how the sky makes the houses look like "doll houses". Image might not've been much to look it if it wasn't negative. Nice composition - colours work nice and I like that powerline. Reminds me of the game - DELTA FORCE.

Image does lack a bit of sharpness though. I see this is your first entry and to score above 5 on your first entry is good work. Keep it up and remember one thing at DPC - People here like clear, Sharp colourfull images. Go through the Challenge Archives to get an idea what score well and what not.

Best of luck.

swang
by chriskory

Comment by rennie:
Fresh idea. The blur on the first plan is a bit distracting.

swang
by chriskory

Comment by gdanie11:
I think this shot would have looked real good with the children in focus and the background out of focus....some blur for movement is good.

swang
by chriskory

Comment by Titia:
Too much to look at in this picture, there's no resting point.
Would've been much nicer if only the girl on the right was swinging, then the rythm of the wooden plaything would've come out much nicer.

swang
by chriskory

Comment by DefyTime:
Great motion here...like the tone also

aibrubus
by chriskory

Comment by rennie:
Doll houses :) Gave it a 6. Nice effect on colours.

swang
by chriskory

Comment by ElGordo:
You almost had it here! Those swings would be terrific if they presented a rhythmic cascade. Good effort anyway!

swang
by chriskory

Comment by k4ffy:
i think i would have liked this one better in color.