Eggs
by eaneiv

Comment by Claya:
Interesting play of light, maybe a bit too countrasty though. Something about composition throws me a bit off too.

Eggs
by eaneiv

Comment by stphq:
the shadows are a bit too busy for me...

Rhythm
by eaneiv

Comment by arnit:
Critique Club:
The subject isn't that bad. The idea is good but the executin isn't that great. The colors are good. Like the brownish feelding of this picture. I think you could use this background for future shots. It looks like fun to shoot. In this photo the main subject is hard to spot. Is it the shades, is it the table, is it the white light coming in, is it the mirror? My idea for this would have been to take a close up of the reflection at the end of the table. For your first challange this isn't so bad. Keep it up and don't quit.

Good luck in future challanges :)

Best regard, Arni
//www.torfason.is

Rhythm
by eaneiv

Comment by nlghttrain:
althoguh an interesting idea, it was not well excicuted. The focus seems a bit soft, that bright spot is way to over exposed and the rest is under exposed. More work on the lighting is nessisary

Rhythm
by eaneiv

Comment by Lilhoop:
the light shining through takes away from the rhythm.

Rhythm
by eaneiv

Comment by rkligman:
Just not very interesting. No great tone or contrast or focus. - 3

Rhythm
by eaneiv

Comment by fencekicker:
This is more interesting as a thumbnail. I'd like more color, and something extra to look at that helps me understand what you are trying to convey.

Rhythm
by eaneiv

Comment by DefyTime:
Different

Rhythm
by eaneiv

Comment by arvinder:
OK