"OCB: Obsessive Compulsive Breakfast"
by KickDrum5150

Comment by Alexys:
Great picture. I love the composition & the colours are fantastic, too.

"A View From Childhood"
by KickDrum5150

Comment by Natasha:
Critique Club

Composition-Content

Your idea is great, very original approach to yellow. I like the composition that you have used, an interesting perspective. The yellow letters really stand out against the background and in comparison to the other colours.
Technical
Your lighting is fantastic, the yellw letters have a great glow to them and interesting shadows, while the others letters are not emphasised, therefore drawing the viewers attention to ASK.
Focus seems to be quite soft overall, I wonder if you used a tripod, with such a slow shutter speed I think that a tripod is vital. However the overall softness does add to the abstractness of the shot. DOF is fantastic, but with that aperture focus on the main subject would be pretty hard to achieve, perhaps a smaller aperture would have helped the focus.
My Opinion
Great shot, very original and great lighting. Good Luck in the next challenge.

"A View From Childhood"
by KickDrum5150

Comment by mcrael:
Nice abstract, but could be improved by crisper focus. Too soft overall.

"A View From Childhood"
by KickDrum5150

Comment by Konador:
It looks great the way the ASK letters seem to be glowing.

"A View From Childhood"
by KickDrum5150

Comment by jerrft:
This could have been composed much better - good idea though.

"A View From Childhood"
by KickDrum5150

Comment by Diana:
This is really good i like your lighting and love the framing. I would like to know how to fram like that . I have PhotoShop element 2. Can it be done with that? 10

"A View From Childhood"
by KickDrum5150

Comment by Antithesis:
NOt sure what this is exactly, but it\'s cool. I think a tighter crop would have done it more justice.

"A View From Childhood"
by KickDrum5150

Comment by kellie:
nice

"A View From Childhood"
by KickDrum5150

Comment by casualguy:
Ok

"A View From Childhood"
by KickDrum5150

Comment by justine:
Interesting shot......you have a good eye, very different.