Kitchen Table
by fernandacapibaribe

Comment by Philos:
Critique club Comment,

Hi from the Critique Club.

I think this image could have scored a lot better if you had done some things different.
Let me explain.
The flowers and the blue glass vase are nice, and if you would have framed it different, and focus it better, this would have been a nice image.
To be honest I can’t find any point in this pic that is in real focusm or maybe this is motion blur?
The right top of the picture is also blown out.
The DPC voters tend to like sharp photo’s.
But don’t give up, you’ll see you will get better and better here at DPC.

Kitchen Table
by fernandacapibaribe

Comment by haircut:
This lacks creativity. These pieces dont actually fit the category (doesnt hold water). Also the background looks as if it was supposed to be white, but its kind of pink instead.

Kitchen Table
by fernandacapibaribe

Comment by smurman:
meets the subject, but doesn't do much for me.

Kitchen Table
by fernandacapibaribe

Comment by hanneke:
the glass-pot is out of focus, and I think voters will vote you down for it. composition looks nice :)

Kitchen Table
by fernandacapibaribe

Comment by Melethia:
This is a rather pleasing still life composition. Just needs a bit whiter white, maybe. I like the vase and flowers just out of focus.

Kitchen Table
by fernandacapibaribe

Comment by KarenNfld:
Image is grainy. I think it would have been better if you had focused on the flowers and vase rather than the rather boring, empty plain glass.

Kitchen Table
by fernandacapibaribe

Comment by Jaded_Housewife:
the titlting is odd there. i like the border though.

Kitchen Table
by fernandacapibaribe

Comment by BrianR:
Definition could have been sharper

Kitchen Table
by fernandacapibaribe

Comment by talmy:
The colorful background draws away too much from the subject glass container. Why can't we see more of the container?

Kitchen Table
by fernandacapibaribe

Comment by GoodEnd:
A clear issue to shot glass are the reflections and hot spots. A lot displeasant distraction. You need to control the light hardly to achieve good results. Single light sources usualy do a best job than multiple. Other issue here is the lack of focus.