Keys
by nathaliedoo

Comment by DougPaz:
Nice capture, maybe just a bit too edgey though. Interesting concept.

Keys
by nathaliedoo

Comment by Arjen:
I've joined this site about a week ago and I've already seen several pictures of keyboards. Please, no more pictures of keyboards! Get away from your computer before you start taking photos! No offence intended to the photographer, I'm just pleading for more original subjects...

City Windows
by nathaliedoo

Comment by justine:
Like it.

City Windows
by nathaliedoo

Comment by inspzil:
This really looks like an illustration. I think the red side looks good. The yellow side though maybe should've been 2 tone a little more or something to make the windows stand out more. - Inspzil

City Windows
by nathaliedoo

Comment by Turbotech:
This is intresting. It actually looks alike a drawing. I think I like it.

Keys
by nathaliedoo

Comment by Gracechild7:
I like the post processing to this photo.

City Windows
by nathaliedoo

Comment by connie:
Nice job. Great colors!

Keys
by nathaliedoo

Comment by Ricky Cleave:
outrageous contrasts you've lost all detail in your whites where there normally would some texture.

City Windows
by nathaliedoo

Comment by Ptman:
This looks very grainy to me, not sure if this is what you wanted to achieve. Interestimg shot.

House in the Snow
by nathaliedoo

Comment by ambaker:
Critique Club Review

I think that one of the things that might have hurt your score is the picture's size. Smaller pictures tend not to do as well because the details are harder to see. While I am not a rule of thirds purist, the centering of the main focus of this picture results in the building on the right being cut off. It tends to be a small but jarring end to the direction the eye wants to move. The darker patch at the bottom of the screen tends to act as a barrier to the eye. I don't know that cropping it out would have worked better, but it might be something to try, or to have approached the scene at a bit of a different angle to use it to lead the eye into the scene.

Overall this is a very good picture. I believe that your score should have been higher, and as I mentioned before I suspect the size to be part of the cause. I really like the overall exposure. Even though it tends to wash out in places, like the sky above and to the right of the trees, I think with this scene it works quite well. I especially applaud your manipulation of the colors. Had this been straight color, or black and white, this picture would not nearly have been as strong. I really like the mood the coloring sets in this piece. Focus, contrast, and exposure are all very, very, good.