The Look
by oravsky123

Comment by posthumous:
nice interaction of foreground, midground and background. 7

The Look
by oravsky123

Comment by honeyswife77:
Cool picture

The Look
by oravsky123

Comment by winkolees:
total black....

The Look
by oravsky123

Comment by Perfect-Calamity:
Has a very creepy feel to it. A little more contrast would make the image more dramatic, but nice try!

The Look
by oravsky123

Comment by smardaz:
funky,sexy,cool....i like it 10

campbells-warm.jpg
by oravsky123

Comment by Bernard_Marx:
Not too corny, no. I do find the onion-curl a distraction to the composition, but in general I think it is a lovely shot - I looked at it when it came in...

campbells-warm.jpg
by oravsky123

Comment by StuckOnTheFarm:
eyewave made some really good points. I would like to add that in order to get both the "Campbell's" AND be able to see the soup inside, you are going to have to shoot it at and angle that is not really featuring either fully. With that said, I would suggest using a mug that is not quite as busy with it's graphics and go for one that simply says "Campbells" on the front, preferably in a larger font than the one here.
Also, I would suggest using regular carrots instead of baby carrots, since the long ones could add a nice linear element to the image. Maybe bring some of the veggies to the fg to fill in the dead space in the bottom rhc.

campbells-warm.jpg
by oravsky123

Comment by h2:
composition is not outstanding but OK. pepper and salt look tilted, you could have placde a coin or some cardboard below their left edges to make them look standing upright. I had chosen a POV, where the table is not parallel to the camera. Lighting is a bit flat, an extra light on the mug would have been nice and had created a stronger shadow. DOF is perfect. Crop is a bit tight, especially at bottom. I had cleaned the inside of the mug, the smeared yellow *whatever* doesn't look to appetizing. I miss something of a fresh green in the soup, also the noodles shouldn't have all been placed at the front. Light color is a tad too warm for my taste. Scratches on table slightly distract, if you cannot avoid that, place a veggie knife there - that would explain the scratches.

Hope that helps.

Taylor2
by oravsky123

Comment by silverfoxx:
congrats with your new cam!:) beautiful hair she has

Benedictine Alter
by oravsky123

Comment by tnun:
Heilig. Wo ist es?