Fear of snow
by Nitesead

Comment by charmayne:
interesting composition but poorly focused

First Things First
by Nitesead

Comment by 777STAN:
Challenge entry? I'm flushed!!!! ;}

First Things First
by Nitesead

Comment by dallasdux:
I think you had the right concept going here but the color scheme in the room doesn't really enhance the subject. These are merely suggestions from an ameteur so take them for what they are worth.

1) The angle of the phot comes off titled and makes you want to turn your head to get things in alignment. Might suggest a different crop and rotation.

2) The colors are all very neutral. I can see just on the right bottom edge that something had some yellow and reds and those colors would have been a nice addition. Right now everything gets lost as there is no color contrast.

3) Not sure (or at least not positive) that the title is conveying what you want to convey. It is probably, "First things first" from the aspect of time to hit the commode upon waking. But, with the bath products barely visible in the bottom right, it could be that you want to emphasize that you neeed to wash hands, put on deodorant, or brush teeth first.

As stated above, I think you were on to the right idea, it just did not come off, to me, in the best fashion this time.

Anyway, I hope at least a little of this above is useful.

First Things First
by Nitesead

Comment by robinssong:
Get the message. I can't really tell you how, but the idea could be improved to make a better photo.

First Things First
by Nitesead

Comment by lauraodom:
Meets Challenge - 2
Lighting/Processing - 1
Composition - 0
Overall Impression - 0
"WOW" factor - 0
Score: 3

First Things First
by Nitesead

Comment by ragamuffingirl:
So so so so wrong, but so so so so true!!!

First Things First
by Nitesead

Comment by Citadel:
Strange angle but given the title it works as it does draw attention to the toilet. It may have helped to get in a little bit tighter on it however.

First Things First
by Nitesead

Comment by Nuzzer:
4: The only thing I can say is I'm glad you had the seat down :)

First Things First
by Nitesead

Comment by minniedent:
Intersting angle, but the sink is a bit distracting.

Hungover Grover
by Nitesead

Comment by Jaded_Housewife:
disturbing yet hilarious. nicely done. lol