The Tissue and the Toy
by squidvicious

Comment by robinssong:
Focus is good. Subjects are a little bland. It does meet the challenge, though. :)

The Tissue and the Toy
by squidvicious

Comment by Melethia:
Harshly lit with a distracting background, though it does fit the challenge.

Harp Beer.............Enjoy
by squidvicious

Comment by riccardino:
I found it too soft.
The environment is also not really a good one for an advertisement.

Harp Beer.............Enjoy
by squidvicious

Comment by BeckyT:
I like the B/W tone. Photo seems a bit soft. The Harp Beer should have been more in focus sense that is the focal point of this whole challenge.

Harp Beer.............Enjoy
by squidvicious

Comment by Nuzzer:
5: This doesnt grab me like a beer add should.

Harp Beer.............Enjoy
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Comment by conect:
looks like a picture that you'd taken out a night at the town... and not in a good way.

The Tissue and the Toy
by squidvicious

Comment by noraneko:
Straighten horizon, better lighting on tissue. Also, grain of wood is distracting.

The Tissue and the Toy
by squidvicious

Comment by 777STAN:
A much tigher crop could really help this photo IMHO. Paint flaking on left & right is a bit distracting. Also, though I love the woodgrain of the floor, it does tend to blend with the toy. (I got some comments similar to this on one of my photos...one of my highest rated photos in fact. Look at my profile for the recent Rope challenge entry.) Blessings! :)

Harp Beer.............Enjoy
by squidvicious

Comment by swankFoto:
so snapshottish.
need to have the bottle sharper for advertising

Harp Beer.............Enjoy
by squidvicious

Comment by neophyte:
I like the retro look this has. However, the photo needs more contrast (maybe a levels adjustment) and a tighter crop to bring more attention to the product being sold.