softly fading
by elmomarie

Comment by glad2badad:
Interesting take on an everyday subject. The colortone is interesting. I think the highlights have lost a bit too much detail in the top part of the seed head. JMO of course. Good luck in the challenge.

softly fading
by elmomarie

Comment by bs-photos:
Nice editing I like the effect.

softly fading
by elmomarie

Comment by MAK:
for some reason this really caught my eye so you get a 7 well done, loverly tones to the yellows/greens

bitter sweet
by elmomarie

Comment by kje83:
You're so cute...=)

walk away
by elmomarie

Comment by elmomarie:

Originally posted by shalrath: This is really cool! The bottom right feels a little empty, perhaps a different crop? Still, love the message :). The prose is great as well, yours?

thank you so much. i kinda wanted the picture to feel empty that's why i left the space... thank you though. and yes it's mine.

Screaming Out in Silence
by elmomarie

Comment by shalrath:
Amazing work! I love the softness and the light, great B&W. fav.

walk away
by elmomarie

Comment by shalrath:
This is really cool! The bottom right feels a little empty, perhaps a different crop? Still, love the message :). The prose is great as well, yours?

my love has become an affliction
by elmomarie

Comment by wavelength:
Unfortunately, you got so close to the subject that everything on the body but the hand becomes an abstraction of humanity. You have to leave enough of the subject in to make a visual and emotional connection. At the very least the mouth should be here, preferably with smeared lipstick to add to the story.

I'm not saying that I don't like this, I do. The comments you received were all from pretty accomplished photographers, people who have been examining these things for a long time. You have pleased the artists, the abstract thinkers.

Unfortunately to please the crowd, you have to take your artistry and distill it into a club and beat them over the head with it. ;)

my love has become an affliction
by elmomarie

Comment by posthumous:
powerful abstract shapes and negative space. Brilliant. 10

my love has become an affliction
by elmomarie

Comment by muur88:
fascinating composition.