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| 05/05/2007 02:56:24 PM |
Bubbles of Funby JawnyRicoComment by atupdate: Hello from the Critique Club:
I didnât vote in the Bubbles Challenge so this is the first time Iâve looked at your image. My first impression was âWow, this is a fun imageâ. The joy in the girlâs face is infectious and the lighting and focus are perfect. Obviously, a lot of people had the same impression, as your score was very good on this shot. I think the comments you received sum up the few short comings this image has very well. The horizon looks tilted and the crop needs to be a bit tighter on the girl, as the background is fighting her for attention. With a simple 5 degree rotation counterclockwise and a crop to place her at the right third of the image, the girl and the bubbles take on a stronger presence. A great capture and Iâm sure your cousin loves the shot you took of her. Nice job.
Feel free to PM me if you have any questions regarding this critique.
Tim
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| 05/02/2007 02:48:13 AM |
Dreamscapeby JawnyRicoComment by SaraR: Well composed with the foreground and then the curve of the bay leading the eye around the picture. The light does seem very harsh, and I suspect you may have produced a stronger photo earlier or later in the day. |
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| 05/01/2007 06:33:04 PM |
Bubbles of Funby JawnyRicoComment by corinne: you truly capture a little girl having fun. I like how crisp and focused the girl is, and the bubbles, and how the mountains, while there, do not dominate the photo. |
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