Age 40 on the 16th
by Sheryll

Comment by Hairlessman:
Hey..nice...like the honesty.

Age 40 on the 16th
by Sheryll

Comment by photom1946:
may i be the first to wish you a happy birthday? i will tell you this image, except for the white-ish thing along the bottom edge is very good! i also would have preferred to NOT see the window/doorway behind you too. but lighting seems to match the mood you show here. all that to say, a 7!!

Waikiki close to midnight
by Sheryll

Comment by talj:
I like your composition but it looks to me like you would benefit from placing the camera on a stable surface such as a tripod. This would get rid of the blur in your photo :o)

Waikiki close to midnight
by Sheryll

Comment by bmartuch:
Way too out of focous. Did you use a tripod? This would be nice if it were focused more clearly.

Age 40 on the 16th
by Sheryll

Comment by gg3rd:
Intense eyes. Good crop.

Age 40 on the 16th
by Sheryll

Comment by Arcanist:
Simple face shot, low/flat lighting, lots of noise in the background.

Looks like this could have been quite a 'coy' image, but fails due to the quality of light and the distracting background (walls/door opening of the room).

Try reshooting with a soft light off to one side, darkness/shadows off to the opposite and from an above angle where more bedding (or skin if you wish) is viewable and the room is not taking away from the allure of the image.

Score: 3

Age 40 on the 16th
by Sheryll

Comment by klstover:
Very natural and beautiful face. The shape in the background is a bit distracting but I like the composition overall.

Age 40 on the 16th
by Sheryll

Comment by HaikuSailor:
40..*sigh*.. I'm there with you in a few short months. Nice photo, I love that you chose a very natural look..Happy Birthday!

Waikiki close to midnight
by Sheryll

Comment by chalice:
The hotel lights are a bit out of focus, which is a shame.

Age 40 on the 16th
by Sheryll

Comment by graphicfunk:
A very nice character study with an unforgettable lovely stare. Bump.