He Heard It Straight From The Horse's Mouthby
ShannonComment by Neuferland: Greetings from the Critique Club!
Hi! I loved this shot during the challenge but then I'm a big horse fan!
This was a good shot overall but a couple of things jumped out at me right away when looking at it. The horse's ears were cut off at the top of the shot and the light across the top was a bit blown out. I like the expression in the horse's eyes, it's almost as if he's saying, "Have I got a secret for you!" and the bemused look on the man's face is perfect. The cropping is a bit loose on the right side to me, and the black in the lower left corner is distracting, maybe a different crop, longer top to bottom so you just have the horse's head and top part of the neck and the the man, with the crop on the outside of his arm?
The border also seems just a bit thick for this shot. I like the border, it plays off the white of the horse very well but maybe just a tad thinner?
The colors are sharp, crisp and clear and big plus in my book, especially on a shot like this and it looks like it was a cloudy day so that makes it even harder sometimes to get that good light but with the exception of the blow out across the top, the lighting is close to perfect for this shot.
I just placed my hands on the screen, blocking off the bottom fence and the left side just to get an idea and it came out pretty well. If you do decide to recrop this I would really like to see it.
Hope this was helpful.
Good Luck In Future Challenges!
Deannda
DNeufer@stny.rr.com if you have any questions or want to discuss this further!