The Wave
by Shannon

Comment by Gordon:
A great subject but technically could maybe be a bit brighter and more exposed ?

The Wave
by Shannon

Comment by tyrkinn:
The edges seem a bit jagged, looks unnatural. The crop is great and the subject is a classic. 6

The Wave
by Shannon

Comment by TooCool:
Very soft focus....Need sharpening...

Practice Practice Practice
by Shannon

Comment by falvey:
Photo is a bit under exposed. Maybe try to get the bal a bit more into the picture. Leads the eye off the side a bit.

Practice Practice Practice
by Shannon

Comment by RiderGal:
It bothers me that the ball is just barely in the photo... I'm wondering if you cropped it this way on purpose or whether thats just how the shot was. I think you could have taken a lot more shots to get that better. I wish the club were already coming down rather than just up on his shoulder, giving the viewer more of a clue about what was going to happen. I think you might have been able to fix a little of the white sky by using a polzarizing filter, but I'm not sure.

Practice Practice Practice
by Shannon

Comment by Firstrich1:
Hope he missed the camera...:) the contrast and saturation on this shot needed to be played with a bit. and I would have liked to see the ball a little distance from the edge of the picture. 6

Practice Practice Practice
by Shannon

Comment by MarkS224:
Kinda dark, I think maybe you exposed for the sky. Location is a little distracting with the parking lot/tennis courts

Practice Practice Practice
by Shannon

Comment by dr rick:
Putting the ball right at the edge helps the composition here.

Musical Memories
by Shannon

Comment by erehwon:
Beautiful colours. Evokes memories, which is what all good nostalgia photos should do!

Musical Memories
by Shannon

Comment by Imagineer:
NIce quirky angle for the subject. Perhaps could have improved it by getting closer and cropping parts of the case (filling the frame). that way we could see some more detail of this cute little record player.