Here comes the rain again
by Sifin

Comment by timfythetoo:
Greetings from the Critique Club -

Welcome to the wonderful world that is DPC. Not a bad score for your first entry. My first four entries were well below 5.

Your image here has cool color. The clouds and light play also hold some interest. But i think what your image is lacking is a focal point of interest. The sky is cool and all but its not enough to carry the image - which it has to. I feel you have a bit too much black space on both top and bottom. Primarily the top though. It just isnt balanced well. I think this would be better as a thinner panaoramic image.

Not much else I can offer you here as critique. But I do hope you enjoy your time here at DPC. It can become quite addictive but there is also such a wealth of info to be taken from this place and its photographers. Have fun and keep on shooting!

Tim

Here comes the rain again
by Sifin

Comment by Haneck:
Cool! this would be awesome with even more contrast! Good job though - I like your composition.

Here comes the rain again
by Sifin

Comment by joshua:
how about a tighter crop on top to match the bottom side?

Here comes the rain again
by Sifin

Comment by Scholten:
A little too much dark on top?

Here comes the rain again
by Sifin

Comment by bdenny:
A think a tighter crop would work better (mostly up top).