ordinaryangel
by mkcarrei

Comment by jblaylockrayner:
Nice light and pose.

ordinaryangel
by mkcarrei

Comment by galblue:
different angle but does it work

ordinaryangel
by mkcarrei

Comment by idlecarolyn:
i would have liked this better with more ocean scene

ordinaryangel
by mkcarrei

Comment by hotpasta:
she doesn't look ordinary to me :-) nice perspective

Fast andSlow
by mkcarrei

Comment by karmat:
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by karmat

compositionally, this is a very strong image. I like how the "lines" start at the bottom of the frame and lead up and into it. The curve also gives the photo a nice shape. It feels symmetrical, without being perfectly symmetrical.

Technically, it is also fairly well done. The focus is okay, though I think if the buildings were a bit sharper, the overall image would have been stronger. Finally, I think the contrast needs to be boosted just a hair. The "whites" are good, but the rest seems kinda flat and gray.

Good work, and best to you in future challenges.

Karma

ordinaryangel
by mkcarrei

Comment by Jason_Cross:
I bet the model doesn't like being called ordinary! lol good pose, I wish it was a little bit sharper.

Fast andSlow
by mkcarrei

Comment by sallycinnamon:
this is beautiful. should have scored higher!

Fast andSlow
by mkcarrei

Comment by crik:
nice leading lines and night shot.

Fast andSlow
by mkcarrei

Comment by litlbopeep:
Cool shot...

Fast andSlow
by mkcarrei

Comment by DigiFotoBuddy:
Road and lights give very good feeling of vanishing point. My pick for one of the ribbon.