The sprinklers did it.
by HollywoodHoebag

Comment by Sheryll:
Could use better focus on the girl and more of the bg.

The sprinklers did it.
by HollywoodHoebag

Comment by cools98:
Fit Challenge Criteria: 0/2
Contrast/Color: 1/2
Composition: 0/2
Photo Quality: 1/2
My Subjective Affinity: 0/2

The negative space does not complement the main subject, nor is it a "wow" factor on it's own. The contrast is very flat and the colors dull. The angle the photo was taken at is too awkward for this shot. The centered composition doesn't help either, as well as the cut off toes. The image has very soft focus.

The sprinklers did it.
by HollywoodHoebag

Comment by johnmcboston:
Sorry, don't see the negative space

The sprinklers did it.
by HollywoodHoebag

Comment by bergiekat:
Good aspect for this shot. Perhaps bump the contrast a little. Skin tone looks a touch blue (not the tongue, lol). Grey backgound doing that.

The sprinklers did it.
by HollywoodHoebag

Comment by JeffDay:
theres not much negative space here, not wowing me

The sprinklers did it.
by HollywoodHoebag

Comment by Oded:
Bravo - the best pic of the lot - did you think about it by yourself or did someone help you?

The sprinklers did it.
by HollywoodHoebag

Comment by KuriKuri:
Where's the negative space? Colors are muted and dirty, looks like a snapshot.

The sprinklers did it.
by HollywoodHoebag

Comment by ArpeggioAngel:
Focus and lighting are not sharp in this photo, looks too much like a snapshot. Background/negative space - does not enhance the photo.

The sprinklers did it.
by HollywoodHoebag

Comment by jackal9:
Okay, well I am no expert so keep that in mind, but for me there should be less subject and more neg. space. I like the interesting angle and the expression is great, composition could use some work IMHO. 5

Pure as White.
by HollywoodHoebag

Comment by PHOTOKID:
Nice lighting and framing. Good white balance.