The Matrix Eye - Wake up, someone is watching at you
by rossic

Comment by karmat:
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by karmat

I think the most effective parts of this picture is the fact that it "draws" you to the center, and that the color is so vibrant. The repeating pattern of the diminishing circles really helps to move the eyes into the picture. It gives the feeling of being sucked in (which from what I understand about the movie is appropriate). Also the green gives that "computer" feeling somehow.

I think more focus, or having something at the end of the circles to focus on would help hold attention more. As it is now, the eyes go to the center, and there is nothing else there to see. Also, even though it doesn't look "out" of focus, it does seem to have a lot of clarity either. Finally, I think a more squarish crop, rather than the horizontal one would help emphasize your circles more.

Best to you in future challenges.
karmat

The Matrix Eye - Wake up, someone is watching at you
by rossic

Comment by rossic:

Originally posted by a_berenguer: My sister send this picture to the Green Challenge... It´s the inside of the green bottle...

Sorry but I was not in DP challenge yet when the green challenge. Yes, it is a bottle, you and me had the same idea.

The Matrix Eye - Wake up, someone is watching at you
by rossic

Comment by thatguy:
nice image, a little blurry though, maybe caused by your camera

The Matrix Eye - Wake up, someone is watching at you
by rossic

Comment by Chuckie:
good job. nice pic.

The Matrix Eye - Wake up, someone is watching at you
by rossic

Comment by MattW:
nice idea, i think you should have had someone on the other side of the green thing

The Matrix Eye - Wake up, someone is watching at you
by rossic

Comment by Dustin:
good job. nice pic.

The Matrix Eye - Wake up, someone is watching at you
by rossic

Comment by Rawkgurl:
I really like this picture. Very original... I feel like someone is looking at me through this green circle! Interesting interpretation of the theme!

The Matrix Eye - Wake up, someone is watching at you
by rossic

Comment by Alexys:
My sister send this picture to the Green Challenge... It´s the inside of the green bottle...

The Matrix Eye - Wake up, someone is watching at you
by rossic

Comment by Amiee:
Very cool image. I like the use of depth that you provided for the image. I do believe that the image is a little out of focus though. Good job.

The Matrix Eye - Wake up, someone is watching at you
by rossic

Comment by tyrkinn:
Might be in better focus, nice crop, nice color