Powers in the Flowers
by Warnercable

Comment by mbardeen:
Greets from the Critique Club:

Hi Mark!

I love the colours in this picture, they're vivid and direct. The depth of field is just a bit too small for my tastes, I would prefer to see all of the flowers in focus. The only other thing I would do is to crop off about inch and a half of the left side. That would remove the stray petal and I think it improves the balance of colour in the composition.

All in all a good photo, just needs a little more to make it really good. Good luck in future challenges!

-Matt

Powers in the Flowers
by Warnercable

Comment by kiwiness:
Very colorful, the saturation comes over very well.

Powers in the Flowers
by Warnercable

Comment by corachaos:
Lovely, but a bit blurred.

Powers in the Flowers
by Warnercable

Comment by dacrazyrn:
Good composition. I would like to see deeper DOF to have the red all in focus, also. It seems to blur towards the right side of the photo. the texture of the background is a bit distracting and that stray petal

Powers in the Flowers
by Warnercable

Comment by wewillexplore:
THe focus is definitely off here. Good use of all 3 colors!

Powers in the Flowers
by Warnercable

Comment by jmsetzler:
Interesting composition... the focus seems to be a little soft on the right side of the image... I can't really see a benefit in that... =5

Pigeon holed Illumination
by Warnercable

Comment by kiwiness:
This is abstract. Not sure what it is but it looks very interesting.

Pigeon holed Illumination
by Warnercable

Comment by jdavis:
What part of this is glass? Sorry for having to ask.

Powers in the Flowers
by Warnercable

Comment by tyrkinn:
I would like to see all of the flowers in focus. The tiny thing in the upper left corner could also go. Nice shot though

Pigeon holed Illumination
by Warnercable

Comment by wewillexplore:
Looks like metal not glass..not sure what you were going for.