Following the LIght
by anissaerb

Comment by OmanOtter:
Beautiful simplicity.

Following the LIght
by anissaerb

Comment by DistantColours:
The foliage at the bottom is a distraction - I'd crop it out.

Following the LIght
by anissaerb

Comment by bmartuch:
Beautiful shot. I like the lighting on the hair and how it glows.

Following the LIght
by anissaerb

Comment by BobsterLobster:
Burning of background is excessive and looks unnatural. Composition feels unbalanced, too much negative space on left, and unsure as to whether you wanted the model in the centre or not. Light is terrible, bad shadows cast especially on the wall and her face. She looks a little too posed, you don't want a snapshot. Her face is a little red/purple which should have been fixed in PS. Lots of highlights in the dress make the composition worse, and take focus away from the face. Inclusion of plants in the foreground looks accidental, you should either have not included them, or make more of a feature of them. Her pose has not flattered her figure, she looks like she's wearing a sack. I would have asked her to bring her hip in or to hide behind the door more. Hands are a very important part of any portrait, it looks like she wasn't sure what to do with her right hand. She doesn't seem terribly sharp, either bad focus or wrong shutter speed.

Following the LIght
by anissaerb

Comment by staticoy:
she needs more light on her face.

Following the LIght
by anissaerb

Comment by kvickrey:
This would have been an even more beautiful shot if a reflector had been used to put more light on her face. Pretty girl, pleasant look on her face, great composition.

A Daisy a Day
by anissaerb

Comment by maxxumg:
background is overexposed. focus seems to be off

A Daisy a Day
by anissaerb

Comment by taddzilla:
Focus seems a little on the soft side and the bright background is distracting.

A Daisy a Day
by anissaerb

Comment by cliff_wright:
Nice enough shot but appears quite a soft focus which doesn't seem intentional to me ..

A Daisy a Day
by anissaerb

Comment by neophyte:
Soft focus and a stretch on the theme. Pretty model though. Good luck.