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Comment by smardaz:
color seems a bit flat here, might have been more striking with just the peeled orange imo 5

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Comment by littlegett:
Very interesting concept. It is a bit flat and the colours need some livening but I enjoy the concept. I wonder how hard it would have been to get half the peel intact but empty. Hmm.

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Comment by Mydee1:
It might be me but this appears to be a little flat.

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Comment by rmezzo:
Lighting seems a little flat. Could use a little more saturationg to make things pop.

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Comment by arron_christensen:
Nice idea, but a bit dark on my screen. Another light source would have helped.

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Comment by e301:
Seems very under-exposed, or even un-lightened in processing. The illumination of your subject appears fine, but everything is condensed into such a restricted range of brightness that its actually hard to tell. Cropping, or perhaps lack of it, is a touch uncomfortable too.

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Comment by Child of Light:
Haha! Made me think for a second.

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Comment by kaelacusack:
Neat idea-and I like the detail and the layout of the orange halves. A few critiques-since everything is in focus, it's a little dull. Also-to me it appears underexposed (but different monitors do have different settings). Also-isn't it strange, the two halves clearly don't go together. Also the dark background makes it appear to float, and the underexposure leaves little room for actually seeing the shadows, which make it appear kind of flat.

If it suits, try a lighter background (unless there's a reason you chose this dark one?) and try a larger f-stop (smaller number).

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Comment by tano_gooch:
Overall a bit dark / muted for my tastes.

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Comment by bodilygeography:
very nice