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| 07/28/2004 09:36:23 AM |
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| 07/28/2004 04:43:00 AM |
Balanced Graceby Spanish_GreaseComment by Imagineer: Greetings from the Critique Club!
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Beautiful form, lighting and focus makes this a very attractive image indeed. The composition is sound (perhaps a little too tight on the right) and the subject is indeed well balanced. Of course, nature so often is. The reason this did not score so well in the challenge is probably down to the fact that the shot does not sing of 'balance' per se. Most people would ask "I wonder what theme this represents?" if unaware of the challenge brief, and their answer may be 'Beauty', 'Grace', 'Form', etc.
If I was pushed for sugggestions to improve this I would have tried to achieve a longer DOF and increase the contrast between the background and the main flower itself. Also, given your explanation of its size, a suggestion of the scale might be good for your subject (but would not have helped your placing in this challenge) - and the border is definitely quite overpowering for such delicacy. |
| 07/28/2004 02:58:07 AM |
Bizarre Beverageby Spanish_GreaseComment by Zoomdak: Oh, great shot! Perfect setup =). Egg is straight on, horizon is level, no reflections on the hand and the straw is the finishing touch. Truelly bizarre. |
| 07/28/2004 12:22:36 AM |
The Dandy Pfiffer Cabaretby Spanish_GreaseComment by photom: I really like the instrument, thereddish lighting and the black background. I don't think the hat works well - and I'm not sure about the border - but for am album cover - the border is fine... |
| 07/27/2004 07:03:03 PM |
The Dandy Pfiffer Cabaretby Spanish_GreaseComment by Maverick: I've got to get my saxophone out and take some pictures of it = P The ones I see here are so nice (including this one). I'm not sure I like the hat fading into the background though. A different colored hat might work better, combined with a frame (the red portion) matching the color. |
| 07/27/2004 03:38:31 PM |
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| 07/26/2004 07:36:09 AM |
The Dandy Pfiffer Cabaretby Spanish_GreaseComment by Konador: A little backlighting behind the hat would have caused a nice white outline to it, so it wouldnt blend so much into the background. That would really improve the shot I think. |
| 07/26/2004 01:17:54 AM |
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| 07/25/2004 06:58:45 PM |
Balanced Graceby Spanish_GreaseComment by admart01: one of my ribbon picks this challange == well done with the lighting and composition, really like how you've filled the frame (border is a bit thick, imho) |
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| 07/25/2004 06:41:50 PM |
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