beautiful
by TMsmile

Comment by xodiak:
This is actually a nice shot. Its seems a bit too close though. Your model's head is cropped out at the top and there just doesn't seem to be enough space around her face making the shot feel cramped. However, considering that the flash looks like it wasn't bounced and was mounted on the camera, I'm amazed you didn't get any red-eye.

beautiful
by TMsmile

Comment by paynekj:
Good idea and you've got the exposure right, but you needed to have the eyes in focus rather than the teeth.