Essence
by Shiiizzzam

Comment by bpickard:
grandma/suck eggs risk..but...would have lost hair strand and darker neck/shoulder/clothing to left while keeping the great mouth position. I love it though!

Essence
by Shiiizzzam

Comment by wkmen:
pretty nice skin tones, cropped an air of mystery, good title

Essence
by Shiiizzzam

Comment by xtabintun:
I'm not sure if I understand this photo, really. It is an interesting composition, it just doesn't appeal to me. The rigid abruptness of the collar bone takes away from the lips and the shirt. Perhaps the shot might be better taken of her back and have her looking over her shoulder? also, I think the hair that is visible distracts. 5

Essence
by Shiiizzzam

Comment by DougPaz:
Wonderful, the small amount of dress or towel in the lower right makes it. Sometimes it is better to see a bit of clothing than none at all. It can actually be more alluring as it is in this shot. I like the lips in the upper corner as well.

Essence
by Shiiizzzam

Comment by peete:
cropping is very good here. gives you everything you want to see

Essence
by Shiiizzzam

Comment by Kha0S:
Clean, simple shot with smooth skin tones and good detail. The edge of the towel is a little washed out, and the reflection on her lip gloss is somewhat distracting. The dark background has some unintelligible detail that's a little distracting to my eye.

Essence
by Shiiizzzam

Comment by saintaugust:
very soft and pleasing to the eye.

Essence
by Shiiizzzam

Comment by marbo:
Interesting view point and very good lighting.

Essence
by Shiiizzzam

Comment by flip89:
The line of the neck is very sensuous and inviting. A suggestion for another shot, why not just crop the swathe of cloth to have a nude feel?

Essence
by Shiiizzzam

Comment by hopper:
nice tone ... cool lips ... creative composition ... 8