Relaxation
by CronMon

Comment by karmat:
CRITIQUE CLUB CRITIQUE
by karmat

Compositionally, I like how the different lines at different angle interact with each other. The point from where the hammock is hanging from leads down and into the man nicely. Then, the arms add to this. His left hand is a bit distorted -- it looks really big in proportion to the rest of his body, quite possibly due to the "wideness" of the lens, I would think.

Technically, exposure, focus, color, etc is all pretty good. The sky looks like it has been brightened quite a bit, and the color in it looks a bit off, but everything else is good.

Overall, it made sense to me -- someone who has worked and achieved success can take the time to linger and rest in what looks like a luxurious setting. I guess, though, it may have been a tenuous stretch for some.

Good work, and best to you in future challenges.
Karma

Relaxation
by CronMon

Comment by dootiekay:
ok... that guys chest is REALLY harry...

Relaxation
by CronMon

Comment by Ringostarr:
I like everything except the sky looks like it was taken with a cell phone...

Relaxation
by CronMon

Comment by jverkamp:
Now that's what I call success! The colors are nice as well.

Relaxation
by CronMon

Comment by Man_Called_Horse:
And this has to do with success how?

Relaxation
by CronMon

Comment by Palundrium:
Gorgeous colors! The sea matching the sky. Great composition as well - vertically, half and half, horizontally, thirds. All the lines are nice too. Only thing I wish was that your subject was a little more well lit. Still well done.