Neon Guitar
by tolovemoon

Comment by jenesis:
In an effort to give more feedback, here goes. The colors in this could definetly be more vibrant, being a neon sign and all. And the crop is uninteresting. Maybe if it had been off center or there was something else in the picture to add a little more interest. The idea is good for an after dark shot though.

What do I look like when I check the mail?
by tolovemoon

Comment by alexvolo:
Nice idea. But the letter and the hand is a little bit overexposed.I think the face of the person if wouldn't have cutted could add a center of interest to the shot.

Neon Guitar
by tolovemoon

Comment by moodville:
Hrm, not had much experience with shooting or looking at neon sign photographs so not sure how to critique this. Personally, I dont get much of a reaction to this. The diagonal composition is good, it doesnt appear blurry although there are a few strands of light in a few places. I assume that was the thickness of the light and most neon is bright so not quite sure about the exposure either. It's not a bad shot, it's just kinda there. Sorry I couldnt have been more helpful.

What do I look like when I check the mail?
by tolovemoon

Comment by admart01:
Creative POV - I like your idea here. Hard to find subject(s) as the letters are fuzzy and your chin is washed out, hand (?) is blown out.

What do I look like when I check the mail?
by tolovemoon

Comment by neenee1999:
Interesting shot, and you are very creative to have thought of this, the lighting is perfect for this shot because it accentuates the subject. Good job

What do I look like when I check the mail?
by tolovemoon

Comment by Coley:
nice idea...too bad it is a little blown out

What do I look like when I check the mail?
by tolovemoon

Comment by snowflake:
clever idea, not good focus

Neon Guitar
by tolovemoon

Comment by peecee:
over exposed I'm afraid

What do I look like when I check the mail?
by tolovemoon

Comment by WhidbeyPix:
a bit overexposed but interesting pov

Neon Guitar
by tolovemoon

Comment by Dave Gordon:
I like the way you've isolated the sign and kept the exposure low enough to be sure the background stays black.