Gangster pooh
by monkeykt91

Comment by Melethia:
Greetings from the Critique Club!

Hi Katie,

I see you've entered one challenge so far - welcome to DPC! You'll find this is a great place to get a lot of very good advice to help you move forward with photography. In looking over your comments, you've already received some excellent advice and suggestions for this particular entry with respect to composition, focus, lighting. One thing you might want to look at before your next entry is a tutorial on how to size your images to give the most impact within the limits of DPC. That tutorial is here.

I do hope you'll try another challenge!

If you have any questions or comments about this critique, feel free to send me a Private Message (click on my name to go to my profile page, then click on the Private Message link.)

Gangster pooh
by monkeykt91

Comment by Denise:
ah, I love pooh, even as a gangsta, too bad picture isn't a little bigger

Gangster pooh
by monkeykt91

Comment by Love6:
too small to really judge properly- overall it seems like a very low quality JPG... take advantage of the size options available... its easier to judge an image that one can see finer detail in

Gangster pooh
by monkeykt91

Comment by Arcangel:
Blurry,looks like a snapshot.

Gangster pooh
by monkeykt91

Comment by NikonJeb:
I would have liked to have seen some more time and effort spent on this. The size could be bigger, the contrast/tonal ranges could have been enriched, and the concept expanded upon in more depth. The tilt is good, the focus softness could work.......I hope you see this comment as intended to be helpful. Good luck in the challenge.

Gangster pooh
by monkeykt91

Comment by fuzzyt:
Focus seems a bit off. I would pay more attention to composition and lighting. Shadows on the left of the image are distracting and the angle is somewhat awkward for me.

Just my opinion. :)

Gangster pooh
by monkeykt91

Comment by Purple_Girl:
Rather flat light, very little detail.

Gangster pooh
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Comment by bobonacus:
nice angle but the focus seems to be off ... camera shake maybe. Try resting your camera on a table or chair and some books to get the correct height if you dont have a tripod

Gangster pooh
by monkeykt91

Comment by Starbanana:
Would be better if was crisp & in focus

Gangster pooh
by monkeykt91

Comment by GThumbtack:
subject too far away. out of focus. light is didtracting.
the "angled" approach does not work well here.