USS Henry M. Jackson
by SledZepplin

Comment by pwm6:
The horizon is a bit tipped.

USS Henry M. Jackson
by SledZepplin

Comment by hotpasta:
lacks wow factor

Together For Life, Till Death Do We Parth
by SledZepplin

Comment by 777STAN:
Excellent Rendering of the Theme! :)

Together For Life, Till Death Do We Parth
by SledZepplin

Comment by itsamio:
Could've been a little darker, or maybe had more contrast?

Together For Life, Till Death Do We Parth
by SledZepplin

Comment by merchillio:
A rather unusual take on the "life/death" challenge, original!

Together For Life, Till Death Do We Parth
by SledZepplin

Comment by kmusser:
My first impression of this photo is the concept of a new beginning not an illustration of life and death.

Together For Life, Till Death Do We Parth
by SledZepplin

Comment by Jason_Cross:
I think a little different angle might have suited this concept a little better. 5

Together For Life, Till Death Do We Parth
by SledZepplin

Comment by albc28:
You can't really see much of what is going on here. Her hands cover up much of hte ring and I think you have too much negatve space with their bodies. Also without a title I don't see life and death in the photo.

Together For Life, Till Death Do We Parth
by SledZepplin

Comment by markstrong:
I like the concept here

Original Design
by SledZepplin

Comment by RulerZigzag:
Hello, Sled Zepplin, found this in the Critique Club section:

PROS: First thought when looking at this photo is, Nice Car! Love the Thunderbird, always did, so I can't possibly say I don't like the photo overall.

FLAWS: The composition is ok, but the cropping of the right side of it is depriving. Also, the car doesn't fill the frame. With a close crop of just a part of a car, the car should take up the majority of the frame; since the remaining part of the image consists of a bland background. I also find no impact in the natural lighting used here.

I do think the photo scored well, and it's a decent shot. It could have been alot better with better lighting and slight improvement in framing.