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Apples in Paradise
02/17/2009 11:57:25 PM
Apples in Paradise
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Comment by bob350:
Seems to have a yellowish cast. Maybe using a grey card in a test shot would allow correction of white balance in post processing. Might benefit from more careful placement of the various elements of the still life.
Apples in Paradise
02/17/2009 08:12:24 PM
Apples in Paradise
by arisafari

Comment by Moose408:
The lighting is a little too harsh. Perhaps diffusing it would help
Apples in Paradise
02/17/2009 05:46:09 PM
Apples in Paradise
by arisafari

Comment by Sirashley:
The yellow apple really stands out but I think the red background takes away from the red apples.
Apples in Paradise
02/17/2009 02:18:01 PM
Apples in Paradise
by arisafari

Comment by smudgeSMJ:
The shadow from your flash/lighting behind the pineapple is distracting. Also, the shadow from the crease in your material is distracting.
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Apples in Paradise
02/17/2009 01:06:25 PM
Apples in Paradise
by arisafari

Comment by freakin_hilarious:
I can see where you were going with this, but you just didn't get there. A still life is a good idea, but random lettuce and such tossed onto a bumpy piece of red felt with harsh lighting isn't very appealing.
Apples in Paradise
02/13/2009 08:29:34 PM
Apples in Paradise
by arisafari

Comment by DigiFotoBuddy:
Subjects should be little far from the BG. They are almost too close that they are touching the BG. Ligting is little flat.
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Apples in Paradise
02/12/2009 09:12:57 AM
Apples in Paradise
by arisafari

Comment by molinski4611:
Direct on camera flash. That's the first thing I notice when I see those shadows. If you're going to take the time setting up a nice shot like this, google DIY diffusers for your camera, a 25cent piece of something can do wonders.
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Apples in Paradise
02/11/2009 10:57:55 PM
Apples in Paradise
by arisafari

Comment by andrewt:
Try experimenting with different lighting methods. I would recommend both frontal lighting (as you have done here) and bounced top lighting to reduce the shadows.
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Apples in Paradise
02/11/2009 09:59:31 PM
Apples in Paradise
by arisafari

Comment by LadyK:
i like your choice in background, but it takes away from the red apple. the pineapple also takes most of my attention rather then the apple. flash seems harsh as well
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Apples in Paradise
02/11/2009 05:47:44 PM
Apples in Paradise
by arisafari

Comment by Louisa:
The photo seems very dark, and has harsh contrast/lighting. I do like the soft background.
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