Crossed the line: Angry lines
by heavyj

Comment:
I would love to draw this picture....so animated the kind you see in anime.
Ok, so I have to "FOCUS". So The only thing the bugs me is 1. The over exposure 2. The limit of "FOCUS" and 3. The fact that this in in color and here's why; the subject eyes are AWESOME!! I mean there's so much going on in them, the reflections make them agrier.

So suggestions....black and white so that the eyes would stand out and add contrast to the "Angry Lines". Oh, and possibly crop in further to the anger. otherwise nice capture.

Electric parades
by HighNooner

Comment:
Perfect Timing.

Laser Lashings
by Stay

Comment:
A Sensual Pain...great shot.

Under Construction
by bruster54

Comment:
Good idea and perfect title. My only suggestion is to make the white border the same thickness as the web and that's it. The over exposure works as they bleed into the white of the border...nice.

Up
by jeger

Comment:
A rule of third could possibly make this photo...hmmm, i don't know, perfect.
lol. That's the only thing off about this pic is that it's not...off. I really like the color and of course the light.

Reading Between the Lines...
by adamslight

Comment:
STILL LIFE THAT'S STILL. Nice setup.

Industrial
by Connor

Comment:
Sharp, nicely done and I like the orange border.

Six strings that can move your heart
by Vidomatic

Comment:
Wow, that's wicked perfect.

You're My Hero!
by oscarthepig

Comment:
Is it sad I expected Mario to just run across the top to the right. lol.
The photo is Simple, I like it.

Open Road
by E109

Comment:
Nice point of view and central focus for DOP on opposing sides, but the over exposure is a little harsh on the eyes while the striping is warm; Suggestion...perhaps adding a layer beneath the photo containing the same brown tone and erasing the white @ 80 to 90 % opacity could add the tint of brown necessary to mute the contrast.