Hunter Master
by lectrol

Comment:
b]Greetings from the Critique Club! [/b]

I think this image has a lot of potential. The composition, lighting and everything about the shot glasses, liquid being poured and the bottle is great. The only things that kept you from having a higher score was the background and the drastic change from the brightness around the shot glasses to the darkness of the reflections. It's too bad that you only had a towel to use as background, personally I wasn't a fan of the textures near the top. I still gave your picture a 6 though. I, and others, would vote higher with a little less harsh lighting and more gradual change in the reflection. Bottoms up!

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Senay

"Angel's Embrace" (CW)
by JokersSoul

Comment:
Greetings from the Critique Club!

First Impression: I feel that this just wasn't interesting enough, especially when compared to many very high quality images in this challenge.

Composition: Someone mentioned that the white background makes it seems that it is floating in nothingness. This works with it being an angel. Centered composition works fine for this angel.

Subject: I can picture this in a catalog advertising Christmas or Christian decorations. Unfortunately it just didn't have enough wow factor to get those higher votes.

Technical: To me the statue looks too dark. There's a lot of detail in all the cracks, or little edges.

Final thoughts: Congratulations on your new personal best!

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Senay

La grande bouffe
by redpanda

Comment:
This has made me both hungry and very disgusted at the same time :)

It is that easy
by Atsugi

Comment:
Greetings from the Critique Club!

First Impression: I got the idea you were trying to portray but there were a few things that could have been improved.

Composition: The very top of the picture has the background above the counter, actually I think it's the counter edge. Cropping just a little bit higher or lower and straightening the picture to include the counter as a small border at the top or to eliminate it completely would have been better than having a sliver of it diagonally. It's not super noticeable though so not a big detraction. Oh and one other thing would be to include a little more space at the very bottom. As it is now the Comet can is cut off.

Subject: Subject and message is good. I would have liked to see the man and Comet a little brighter with the dishwasher in the back a little darker. I like that the dishwasher is in it, gives you a location rather than just any random floor.

Final thoughts: My goal in every challenge is to beat my average and you succeeded in that, and congratulations on your picture making it into your top 5 highest rated on your profile. Good luck in future challenges!

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Senay

Black Diamond
by keyz

Comment:
Greetings from the Critique Club!

My first impression was whoa this person went all out on the challenge! The blue and red complement each other greatly. Somehow I got stuck with critiquing all the top pictures of the challenge, really not fair. Someone mentioned that there is dust in the background. This may be true but I think it might simply be snow falling. If it is in fact dust then it actually adds to the scene.

I do like this version better than your outtake. In the outtake the tool (I don't actually know what it is called) seems to be overshadowed by the mountain in the background. I also ike the wider landscape shown in this one.

It's a very good product shot with nothing to change or fix really, you should consider contacting Black Diamond :). Sorry I couldn't be of more help!

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Senay

Lens guts
by Yo_Spiff

Comment:
Omg noooo! Note to self be extra careful with the 50mm.

Week 11 - The Fishermen
by jasonlprice

Comment:
I saw this in the recently uploaded images and just had to comment. I love the silhouette and the clouds look great!

088.jpg
by marcwsc

Comment:
This is very nice, lovely shadows as well!

Beach pairs edit
by Melethia

Comment:
I like this one more than the colour. Starting yesterday it has finally been warm enough to go for bike rides. Wish I lived somewhere warm that I could do that year round. I'm jealous.

Hooch & JT
by mandyturner

Comment:
Hello, I'm attempting to comment on all of the pictures on DPC that have zero comments on them.

This is almost frightening, ever see Cujo?