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A Spoon full of Sand
07/19/2011 03:49:49 AM
A Spoon full of Sand
by luckyluciano

Comment by sarampo:
Hi Chrissy m greetings from the Critique Club :)

I'm happy to be able to help you on a comment, I see that you joined recently, and I know how important it is to have some feedback on our photos ;)

First of all, I really like the feeling behind the image, it's a very candid moment, captured on the right timing.

Taking this into consideration on the challenge, I guess that being a Spoon challenge, you would need to give more importance to that aspect.
It's not the main subject in the photo, and in the overall scene it does blend in too much.

Anyway, it's a keeper photo, so you can have it for yourself, since it's a very fun moment.

A few tips on how to improve the photo:

Be careful with the horizon. If possible, try to check it in-camera, to make sure it's straight. If not, that can be corrected in post production.
Also, compose your photo in the viewfinder before shooting. The crop as it is it's too tight, the left foot has been cut ever so slightly.
And lastly, there are a few sharpening techniques that could help you get the most out of this photo, and make it really good!

Hope this helps, please feel free to contact me if you need anything :)

Cheers,
Joao
Storm Clouds
07/17/2011 08:03:09 PM
Storm Clouds
by luckyluciano

Comment by Dphoto:
Beautiful color and nice use of the trees to frame.
Storm Clouds
07/15/2011 04:41:20 AM
Storm Clouds
by luckyluciano

Comment by h2:
the OOF foreground rather distracts, image is a bit underexposed
Storm Clouds
07/13/2011 07:05:11 PM
Storm Clouds
by luckyluciano

Comment by DomD:
Nice shot, but maybe you could crop some of the black out.
Storm Clouds
07/11/2011 12:01:15 PM
Storm Clouds
by luckyluciano

Comment by neophyte:
Nicely framed.
A Spoon full of Sand
07/10/2011 11:08:47 PM
A Spoon full of Sand
by luckyluciano

Comment by kenskid:
Ah Oh.....
Photographer found comment helpful.
Little Cowboy
07/08/2011 12:50:32 AM
Little Cowboy
by luckyluciano

Comment by luckyluciano:
I agree ... it just happened that way .. oh well next time..(:
Pacific
07/08/2011 12:45:38 AM
Pacific
by luckyluciano

Comment by luckyluciano:
Originally posted by Magnum_za:

B&W are seldom used in NG. To make this publishable the focus, imho, should have been manually achieved, on the child's face. Right now it seems the grass is in focus to his right. The foreground grass and his face are OOF. It's cute and fun but not gripping enough, story telling enough.


I have googled black and white photos published by NG ..and actually there are quite a few! sooooo???? and I'm sorry but yours wasn't that "in-focus" either...I'm just sayin! :/
A Spoon full of Sand
07/07/2011 09:46:14 AM
A Spoon full of Sand
by luckyluciano

Comment by gzupruk:
I like the image, though it stretches "spoon" a bit.
Would like to see the image extended a little more to the left- the crop seems a little cramped.
Pacific
07/05/2011 09:37:56 PM
Pacific
by luckyluciano

Comment by Lydia:
I totally love this image. What a cute boy with great hat!


I may or may not be voting, so please do not equate my comment with any score.
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